My feedback :)

[Nikmi]

Hello there Nio. I figured I'd throw you my feedback on project sexhouse.

First of, You have made a really great artistic jobs with your characters. They are amazing eye candy to look at ^^ That said I must proclaim myself slightly dissapointed.

I understand it must take you a fair bit of work to create each image but 4 images a week isn't all that much.. Specificly when many chapters are actually void of any.. well Erotic progress! ) Also I am a bit dissapointed to see that so far only 3 of your 7 girls have been introduced as I had hoped some more CGI of your pale alien girl! )

Of course your project sexhouse CGI series do seem to be fairly new? So I guess its a matter of me waiting a bit longer.. None the less. I hope you will appreciate the feedback and maybe consider some more pages than 4 a week or maybe have the 4 present us with a bit more juice down the road .

- Nikmi

[Nio]

Things are slow because it is new. I wanted to introduce the characters one at a time so each could establish themselves in the story better. I know this is not the most enthralling or complex story in the world, but I would hope that readers want some character development.

It can take a couple hours to just render one image. That doesn't count setup and test renders. That's not an excuse, just a fact of the process. Some are faster than others. The four page format seemed to have worked for GoGoAngels. I figured the same would be true here.

You're in luck, though, since you may be seeing a new girl very soon.

I'm actually open to story ideas as well. If there is something you guys would like to see. I may just work it in.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Nikmi]

Hello there Nio

First off let me apolegize for the rather sloppy first post I made . I honestly didn't expect you to reply and therefor I kinda just hurried in the making of an absent minded post. With the end result that it turned out rather.. Unstructurated.

I understand its time consuming to create the images. And I very much understand that you desire to create some personality for your characters. But if I may be honest, are you sure that can be done in the approach you have chosen? Four pages a week isn't alot of time to tell a story in. I think we can both agree on that. And I am sure most of the subscribers are hoping the four pages a week will hold as much juice as possible.! And in the interest of being honest, your chapters at time are rather.. Empty. I have read your GoGo Angel comics and I love alot of them. But you also manage to put alot more action into each page. In part because you go comic book style. where with Project sex house. You are making single frame per page.

In short what im trying to say is, that i appreciate the fact that you are having to put more work into the creation of every page of Project sex house. But I can't help but feel that at times your desire to tell the story takes focus away from what most of your subscribers like.. The pretty girls exposed in sexual positions ).

Have you considered trying to tell your story as a seperate thing? I am not sure if you fancy yourself a writer? but you could - For example - Release text based stories telling the story of project sex house. and have the four pages a week represent "Visual aid" to said story. The visual aid of course centered around the girls exposed. That will on one hand give you 1. A chance to tell the story you want without having to spend "Frames" and satify the audience that like some story . and 2. Please the audience that just want the fleshy parts .

I imagine a "View story of the week" or "View Pictures of the week" button. In my opinion taking such an approach might be a way to go with Project sex house. as it is a different approach than you have been running with on GoGoAngels (And something that seem to take you more time to create. And the picture style you use is rather suited for a.. graphical novel approach instead of a comic book approach).

Now thats just my five cent. I hope you appreciate some more constructive input. And if you need creative input.. Well I might be able to help you there if you're interested. I am a good writer (A skill harnessed by roleplaying online) if I should say so myself. I got a ton of potential scenarios you could put your girls in. So get in touch if its of any interest. Or just ignore you if you think im being a wiseass xD.

[Nio]

Hmmm, well I can't completely ignore the story. And writing one on the side would probably just be ignored.

Right now the next couple comics are already done. I'll try to spice things up soon, but probably every time a new girl is added there will be a story element to it.

Eventually, we should get to the point, like GGA, where much of the story is explained already and we can just get to the good stuff.

[Nikmi]

Yeah you're probably right. about the story being ignored that is, and I do understand your desire in wanting to introduce the girls one of the time.. I tell you what I will settle for a compromize! Give me a Darn Zeeta extra! I'm tired of seeing her in PG - None explit situations! And she is by far the hottest girl!. I demand a Zeeta extra!